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  1. Posted: August 6, 2017In: Public

    [Not a logline] Does the dark night of the soul occur in act 2, act 3 or in a secret middle place?

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 8, 2017 at 11:56 pm

    Agree with Nir Shelter and Dkpough1. ?"Pulp Fiction" jumps around in space and time, but the basic plot elements are there. ?Tarantino did his homework; he knew how to embed dramatic structure in the narrative.At the start of his career, Picasso ?studied the masters from other eras and painted in raRead more

    Agree with Nir Shelter and Dkpough1. ?”Pulp Fiction” jumps around in space and time, but the basic plot elements are there. ?Tarantino did his homework; he knew how to embed dramatic structure in the narrative.

    At the start of his career, Picasso ?studied the masters from other eras and painted in rather conventional styles before venturing forth into cubism. ?Vincent van Gogh studied the masters, too. ?And he even took classes in painting— Vincent van Gogh!

    Mozart and Beethoven studied musical forms and techniques. ? Not because they were untalented. ?Nor were they taking refuge in a lack of confidence in their own abilities by immersing themselves in musical theory.?

    I think it is necessary to study dramatic theory. ?And that includes popular paradigms (like “Save the Cat” and the “Hero’s Journey”). ?Why? ?Because, if for no other reason, the pop paradigms are the ones that producers, directors and money men are going to be familiar with (if they read any books on the craft at all) so you’ve got to be able to pitch your story in terms they understand. ?They’re going to ask about the “all is lost” and “dark night of the soul” beats– those are the very words they are going to use — and you got to be able to answer them using terminology they comprehend.

    So studying ?theory and paradirms is necessary — but not sufficient. The trap some fall into is to lock onto 1 paradigm to the exclusion of all others as the Holy Grail, the alpha and omega, the complete and universally applicable formula for screenwriting. ?

    And, of course, there is none. ?

    But there are some general universal principles that can be abstracted from all the books ?(And I’ve read them all, ?too many, from the silly to the sublime.) ?And those principles should be used as tools, not rules.

    IMHO

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  2. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 28, 2017 at 9:22 am

    Hi there I think D Forde is also same old lol but 'deeper and denser" too haha They meet in the city where we show him as the fish out of water and then she gets in the truck and he sings to her and she's "in love" lol and then it's all systems go. But ...... he's got to learn to love his estrangedRead more

    Hi there
    I think D Forde is also same old lol but ‘deeper and denser” too haha
    They meet in the city where we show him as the fish out of water and then she gets in the truck and he sings to her and she’s “in love” lol and then it’s all systems go. But …… he’s got to learn to love his estranged son before he can even think about loving a woman …. and that’s his life-changing event (B story) ….. to ultimately get the girl …..
    Thanks 🙂

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2017In: Public

    ANNOUNCEMENT: Have your loglines reviewed with a live Q&A!

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on April 28, 2017 at 6:25 pm

    Any loglines posted here over the next 12 hours will be reviewed by the panel during the event.

    Any loglines posted here over the next 12 hours will be reviewed by the panel during the event.

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