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Honeymooners in the mountains, a man and woman, witness a poaching. The poacher now wants them dead, As they fight for their lives, they learn that time is not what it seems.
Agreed with the above.In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw? Men and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them inRead more
Agreed with the above.
In addition, the logline mentions a man and woman these descriptions are too vague to work well in a logline. Which of them is the main character? What is his or her flaw?
See lessMen and women can be found anywhere, so describe what it is about these particular ones that makes them interesting characters in this story.
Struggling to rise up after a traumatic injury, a man becomes a firefighter. Hindered by extreme medical issues from the incident, he fights for both his job and a woman across the country.
Story, especial for the screen, is best thought of in finite terms. In other words, you need to define a starting point - inciting incident, and an end point - goal. Right now the revised draft of the logline describes an endless situation - he will continue to fight for the job and women to no end.Read more
Story, especial for the screen, is best thought of in finite terms. In other words, you need to define a starting point – inciting incident, and an end point – goal. Right now the revised draft of the logline describes an endless situation – he will continue to fight for the job and women to no end.
As DPG advised, best to structure a logline around an event that motivates the main character to need to achieve a particular goal.
See lessIn a world run by machines, a timid young woman – holding a vital secret – must regain her ability to speak before everything she loves is destroyed.
I think this has great potential. What kind of machines? Is it only machines in the story? or do humans still have control? What is the secret she holds?
I think this has great potential. What kind of machines? Is it only machines in the story? or do humans still have control? What is the secret she holds?
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