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  1. Posted: September 3, 2015In: Public

    When a habitual liar forges the paperwork to establish a rural family practice, she soon finds herself in a blood-soaked examining room, trying to silence the screams of her poorly anesthetized patients.

    Nina Logliner
    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 5:50 pm

    When you describe the forger in the examining room you are describing a scene so I would? suggest removing it. I would be more interested to know who is the antagonist and the stakes which result from her misdeed. The essence of a logline should both entice the reader and give some semblance of whatRead more

    When you describe the forger in the examining room you are describing a scene so I would? suggest removing it.
    I would be more interested to know who is the antagonist and the stakes which result from her misdeed.
    The essence of a logline should both entice the reader and give some semblance of what your story will be.
    Keep going, I would be interested to read another version.
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  2. Posted: September 14, 2015In: Public

    Survivors of the premature reformation of the supercontinent Pangaea tell their stories of the days after the disaster.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 1:37 pm

    Who is the main character and what does he or she want?

    Who is the main character and what does he or she want?

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  3. Posted: September 15, 2015In: Public

    A charming hired hand falls for the same idealistic young woman as his close friend, an emerging revolutionary after they are driven to the rural south by growing violence and corruption in the city. (Besides log line help, would like to know if you would watch this movie?)

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 1:29 pm

    Well, since you asked, the story is too general to elicit my interest.? There is no sense of a particular historical period in which the story takes place.? Nothing in particular that makes this story stand out from all the other love stories about one character who is charming and another who is idRead more

    Well, since you asked, the story is too general to elicit my interest.? There is no sense of a particular historical period in which the story takes place.? Nothing in particular that makes this story stand out from all the other love stories about one character who is charming and another who is idealistic.

    >>>growing violence and corruption in the city.

    When?? Where?? That could apply to any number of cities, in the past — and present.

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