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"When an upper-class rebel is suddenly disinherited by his fed-up father, he struggles to win his father?s approval in order to have his inheritance restored, but his plans derail when he is forcibly drafted to fight in the second US civil war."
Good points about the two-headed logline. A suggestion that has helped me: backstory is the breeding ground for a good character flaw. Consider splitting out one the inciting incidents as backstory (probably the disinherited part). Boil it down to a concise character flaw that will make the main actRead more
Good points about the two-headed logline. A suggestion that has helped me: backstory is the breeding ground for a good character flaw.
Consider splitting out one the inciting incidents as backstory (probably the disinherited part). Boil it down to a concise character flaw that will make the main action of the story very difficult for the MC in act II, but something he must overcome it in order to achieve the goal.
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Because there are cows in it. Literally and metaphorically.
Because there are cows in it. Literally and metaphorically.
See lessWhen ripped off in a car purchase a reckless guy seeks revenge, but must defend himself, his best friend and an attractive receptionist against a psychopathic car salesman.
Here is attempt number 2 (putting inciting incident first): When scammed in a car purchase a reserved accountant seeks justice and inadvertently aggravates a psychotic car salesman.
Here is attempt number 2 (putting inciting incident first):
When scammed in a car purchase a reserved accountant seeks justice and inadvertently aggravates a psychotic car salesman.
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