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  1. Posted: August 2, 2015In: Public

    A seemingly well adjusted 29 year old film maker is forced to face his own insecurities when tasked with producing a movie on teenage female self esteem

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on August 3, 2015 at 5:31 pm

    Hi Matt. Was this double post a mistake? Or intentional?

    Hi Matt.

    Was this double post a mistake? Or intentional?

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  2. Posted: August 1, 2015In: Public

    When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 9:37 pm

    The movie is about the person doing the actions. Therefore this is really about the patient as it is told through her eyes. What is the goals and what would be standing in the way of success.?

    The movie is about the person doing the actions. Therefore this is really about the patient as it is told through her eyes. What is the goals and what would be standing in the way of success.?

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    When a white man uses tribal magic to kill people with their own shadows an Aboriginal youth is sent to stop him from destroying reality.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 4:25 pm

    Try it the other way around. Start with the protagonist, spell out his goal and his conflict: "A young Aborigine must stop a white man using tribal magic to murder people with their own shadows." Stopping a killer is enough of a necessity that you don't need to mention the end of reality in the loglRead more

    Try it the other way around. Start with the protagonist, spell out his goal and his conflict:

    “A young Aborigine must stop a white man using tribal magic to murder people with their own shadows.”

    Stopping a killer is enough of a necessity that you don’t need to mention the end of reality in the logline. In a synopsis, sure, because you can spend a couple sentences explaining what that means. But you don’t want people asking questions in response to a logline because they don’t understand it — you want them asking questions because they’re interested to know more.

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