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A young woman from a conservative family background drops out of Harvard University and rises to fame as a performer in the porn industry.
After a public and messy breakup with her longtime boyfriend, an Ivy League student displaying signs of Histrionic Personality Disorder drops out of school and pursues fame as a performer in the porn industry.
After a public and messy breakup with her longtime boyfriend, an Ivy League student displaying signs of Histrionic Personality Disorder drops out of school and pursues fame as a performer in the porn industry.
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Thanks guys, I appreciate the advice. I'm thinking I may have to scrap this one and try a new one. Will try again later!
Thanks guys, I appreciate the advice. I’m thinking I may have to scrap this one and try a new one. Will try again later!
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The most recent draft of the logline is too long and includes too much redundant detail. What is the specific plot beats you need to make this story work? Inciting incident is the discovery of living in a computer generated world. The goal is to either live with his parents again then is is to saveRead more
The most recent draft of the logline is too long and includes too much redundant detail. What is the specific plot beats you need to make this story work?
Inciting incident is the discovery of living in a computer generated world.
The goal is to either live with his parents again then is is to save the world.
I think saving the world is a bigger stake and therefor think it would make for a better goal. As such the inciting incident needs to instigate him to need to save the world. Perhaps all of humanity live happily in a computer and are fully aware of it to. Then the inciting incident can be his discovery that the digital universe he lives in is falling apart and as a result needs to take action.
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