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  1. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    In order to coordinate an extra-terrestrial landing that is expected to occur in the Australian outback, the Australian Government enlists a controversial think-tank, who are now depending on the success of this event for their own livelihood, think 'Contact' meets 'The Games' TV show.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 1, 2015 at 10:37 am

    Agreed with FFF and DPG. Also what is the inciting incident what event starts the story and sets the MC off on their journey? Hope this helps.

    Agreed with FFF and DPG.

    Also what is the inciting incident what event starts the story and sets the MC off on their journey?

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2015In: Public

    When a woman gets murdered by her husband, she instigates her 5-year old child, who senses her presence, to take revenge against his father.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2015 at 12:01 pm

    As the others said. Who is the main character?

    As the others said. Who is the main character?

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  3. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    With only 24 hours before her life support machine is switched off, a coma patient is given a second chance when she is recruited by an organisation that operates within the human subconscious to help stop a terror group that controls people via their dreams.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2015 at 11:56 am

    The boogeyman of soviet science and ideology died in 1991; it seems to me it's way past time to upgrade to a sci-fi premise relevant and credible in the 21st century. Also, we know so much more about neurophysiology and cognitive science than we did in 1991 that I suggest the notion of "mind controlRead more

    The boogeyman of soviet science and ideology died in 1991; it seems to me it’s way past time to upgrade to a sci-fi premise relevant and credible in the 21st century.

    Also, we know so much more about neurophysiology and cognitive science than we did in 1991 that I suggest the notion of “mind control” is a harder sell, even as a sci-fi concept. Mind manipulation, yes, but that’s a different mind game than “mind control”.

    And I would point out that the objective goal in “Inception” was not mind control; the goal was not to turn any one into human automaton in terms of modifying, let alone controlling, everything a human would think and do. The objective goal was to plant ONE specific idea to effect ONE specific decision.

    What ONE specific objective goal is at stake in the “mind control” via people’s dreams premised in this logline?

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