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  1. Posted: April 12, 2012In: 01, Public

    A fake psychic is haunted by real spirits as they force him to right his wrongs and just annoy the hell out of him.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 22, 2014 at 12:16 am

    "A fake psychic is haunted by real spirits as they force him to right his wrongs and just annoy the hell out of him." They force him to annoy the hell out of himself? Huh? And how can they force him to do anything if they're just spirits? Do his wrongs have something to do with his being a fake, orRead more

    “A fake psychic is haunted by real spirits as they force him to right his wrongs and just annoy the hell out of him.”

    They force him to annoy the hell out of himself? Huh? And how can they force him to do anything if they’re just spirits? Do his wrongs have something to do with his being a fake, or is it something else?

    The irony of the protagonist’s predicament is clear, but what’s at stake for him is not – nor is the antagonist’s motivation. And if whatever wrongs this guy has committed are serious enough for spirits to reveal themselves and accost him, he’s probably not a very sympathetic character.

    If, however, the spirits need his help to accomplish something they, as spirits, are not able to, and he agrees initially just so they’ll stop annoying him, but along the way he actually starts to care about them and learns something about himself?all of that is understandable, but you’ve got to hint at it with the logline. Maybe something like:

    “When a fake psychic is haunted by real spirits, he must find a way to help them move on before their antics get him locked up for good.”

    That shows there’s something at stake for everybody, and it’s all tied in together. Could be a lot of fun!

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2013In: 01

    Removed by poster. Plz remove

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 12:57 pm

    He has to find the scientist before the Allies do-- there's his competition. And he will pay very dearly in terms of his career, or even his life, if he fails in the mission. "Uncle Joe" (Stalin) will not be happy.

    He has to find the scientist before the Allies do– there’s his competition. And he will pay very dearly in terms of his career, or even his life, if he fails in the mission. “Uncle Joe” (Stalin) will not be happy.

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In: 01, Public

    A strict single father, with a hot daughter, defends his home, when she purposefully summons a spell which attracts every horny male in town.

    zombie_3184
    Added an answer on March 29, 2013 at 6:23 am

    So I?m in the final stages of DADDY?S GIRL, working title, originally it was a 40 page short film but now it?s a full blown feature.

    So I?m in the final stages of DADDY?S GIRL, working title, originally it was a 40 page short film but now it?s a full blown feature.

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