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When firefighters are sent out to battle a raging bushfire, an evil spy in their midst must go rouge to help stop the fire.
Hi, I think you meant 'rogue' instead of the colour!
Hi, I think you meant ‘rogue’ instead of the colour!
See lessWhen left alone by his busy father at his office, a young child who believes his father is a professional spy must help deliver coded messages in order to win his father’s pride.
Like the contrast of 'young naivety' vs. 'secret knowledge'. It suggests the character arc might be from naivety -> through to -> wisdom. The "...win his father's pride", implies Father == Antagonist. However what's @STAKE! ? Lose of his father's pride - seeking out the approval of one's fatheRead more
Like the contrast of ‘young naivety’ vs. ‘secret knowledge’. It suggests the character arc might be from naivety -> through to -> wisdom.
The “…win his father’s pride”, implies Father == Antagonist.
However what’s @STAKE! ? Lose of his father’s pride – seeking out the approval of one’s father doesn’t always lead to happiness?
… Perhaps what’s a stake is a whole nation’s government secrets. Wonder if a statement of nationality may help create more context – but will naturally reveal political bias.
Do like how the father has been set as widow – makes it feel fairytale like (think Cinderella). This sets up the child’s archetypal lack as ‘Mother Complex’. Perhaps in the child’s setting out for approval of his father, the ‘moment of recognition’ comes as a resolving of child’s loss of mother …
See lessWhen a lab accident makes him lose his sense of touch, a morally ambiguous top scientist must create a serum before he loses his other senses.
A very creative, interesting logline. I can see the directions in which this story can go and potential challenges he might face along the way; raising questions of how will he try to survive? Will he survive? What will he learn? which is a good sign as it incites imagination, seems cohesive in theRead more
A very creative, interesting logline.
I can see the directions in which this story can go and potential challenges he might face along the way; raising questions of how will he try to survive? Will he survive? What will he learn? which is a good sign as it incites imagination, seems cohesive in the journey the character must go on, and generates interest as it gets you to question what will happen to the protagonist.
Now you’ve got me hooked!
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