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When looters attack their home, a blind mother suffering paranoia from being unable to see must escape from the danger with her family.
Blind and paranoia is an obvious thing. Being visually impaired doesn’t normally cause mental illness. Paranoia isn’t also an issue. She is being attacked. She is right to feel people are out to get her. Looters attacking her home? That may be a momentary problem. You may want to find a differenRead more
Blind and paranoia is an obvious thing. Being visually impaired doesn’t normally cause mental illness. Paranoia isn’t also an issue. She is being attacked. She is right to feel people are out to get her.
Looters attacking her home? That may be a momentary problem. You may want to find a different way of bringing a threat to the woman. But I do like it. I once had an escaped prison enter a woman’s home during a mega storm and she was forced to help him escape.
Her family? Kids? Husband? Why is it on her to lead? We need that here as well.
When a blind woman is trapped in her house by riots, she is forced to flee with her children when looters attack her home.
We could up the stakes a little.
When a blind woman is trapped in her house by riots, she is forced to flee with her children when looters attack her home in a violent rampage.
There are some good bones here.
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See lessWhen dark and disturbing children’s drawings come alive. Its creator, a little girl distressed and insecure, must face and erase these drawings from her life before they control her forever.
Hi alejob. I thought I'd give this a go. I'm not sure about the ellipses. (Probably breaks some logline rule or something.) When her drawings come alive, a little girl discovers she has no control over them, and must erase them before they become increasingly darker, more disturbing... and powerful.Read more
Hi alejob.
I thought I’d give this a go. I’m not sure about the ellipses. (Probably breaks some logline rule or something.)
When her drawings come alive, a little girl discovers she has no control over them, and must erase them before they become increasingly darker, more disturbing… and powerful.
Hopefully reader fills in they were dark/disturbing to begin with.
“Powerful” suggests the best is yet to come.