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When in a village destroyed by war something in the shadows begins to haunt and torment him, a dreamy child must fight to survive and find some happiness along the way.
If it's for an animated short I can see where you are going. What is the child doing to find happiness? Is he looking for a place without war? Maybe something like this... A dreamy child seeks refuge after his village is destroyed and manages a positive attitude even though the entire countryside isRead more
If it’s for an animated short I can see where you are going. What is the child doing to find happiness? Is he looking for a place without war? Maybe something like this…
A dreamy child seeks refuge after his village is destroyed and manages a positive attitude even though the entire countryside is a violent battlefield.
See lessWhen the city is devoured by war. A surviving girl on the verge of madness and a hungry old rat cross their lonely paths in order to find their salvation.
What does salvation look like on the screen?If it's to escape the city, then you should say, "escape the city"If it's to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.Because, if you say the lead character's goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvationRead more
What does salvation look like on the screen?
If it’s to escape the city, then you should say, “escape the city”
If it’s to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.
Because, if you say the lead character’s goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvation means to the lead character.
See lessWhat is the relationship between a script and story logline?
Richiev put it very well, so there's very little to add. However, one thing worth mentioning is that the power of a logline comes from the inherent conflict in the plot it describes. The best loglines are the ones that use the least adjectives to describe a clear cause and effect relationship betweeRead more
Richiev put it very well, so there’s very little to add. However, one thing worth mentioning is that the power of a logline comes from the inherent conflict in the plot it describes. The best loglines are the ones that use the least adjectives to describe a clear cause and effect relationship between the event, obstacle and goal.
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