1. Posted: December 3, 2015In:

    When a spot at the local drag show opens last minute, an overly-confident teenager sneaks in and prepares his act quickly to prove himself worthy of a steady gig.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    Apart from what the others already have asked, I'm kinda wondering who, or what stands in his way? Is it the drag queen diva of the establishment? I actually hope it is. Some old, sassy queen with a razor sharp tongue and unwilling to give up her spot. In what way does a spot open, by the way? DoesRead more

    Apart from what the others already have asked, I’m kinda wondering who, or what stands in his way? Is it the drag queen diva of the establishment? I actually hope it is. Some old, sassy queen with a razor sharp tongue and unwilling to give up her spot.

    In what way does a spot open, by the way? Does someone become incapacitated in some way? Or is it some kind of drag show equivalent of open mike night, which would probably be a recurring thing, but the protagonist is forced to rush things before anyone finds out he’s underage ? presumably it’s a place where they serve alcohol and he’s not yet old enough to drink? This may not fit your idea at all, so I’d perfectly understand if you ignore this. I’m just spitballing here.

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  2. Posted: November 3, 2015In:

    In order to take care of her recently orphaned younger sister, a broke twentysomething decides to sleep around with married men with the intention of blackmailing them, lest she expose them for their infidelity.

    dpg Singularity

    Why does it always have to be a woman who sells her body?? How about a role reversal?? A guy utilizes his only marketable assets-- his looks and charm -- to take care of his loved one by becoming a gigolo, blackmails married women.? Who, after all,? are likelt be more emotionally vulnerable and econRead more

    Why does it always have to be a woman who sells her body?? How about a role reversal?? A guy utilizes his only marketable assets– his looks and charm — to take care of his loved one by becoming a gigolo, blackmails married women.? Who, after all,? are likelt be more emotionally vulnerable and economically dependent? (on their husbands)?

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: November 5, 2015In:

    Small town aspiring singer-turned-nanny struggles to adjust to life in affluent Studio City, CA while pursuing her dreams of success and navigating through a minefield of secrets, fame, and scandal.

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    Neer Shelter Singularity

    Agreed with DPG, not sure how this will fare with such a "seen it before" type story.Concept aside, the logline doesn't fulfill it's primary function - to describe a plot. In order to describe a plot a logline needs to convey specific details about the story, such as; the main character's flaw, herRead more

    Agreed with DPG, not sure how this will fare with such a “seen it before” type story.

    Concept aside, the logline doesn’t fulfill it’s primary function – to describe a plot. In order to describe a plot a logline needs to convey specific details about the story, such as; the main character’s flaw, her goal and inciting incident.

    Hope this helps.

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