1. Posted: December 28, 2013In:

    A teenage girl, who has struggled with Autism her whole life, spots a bright balloon and tries to show the person nearest her but they don't understand, instead they give her a rubik's cube. It is only when she finishes the puzzle, that they understand her and see the balloon.

    There's an intriguing post-WW2 French feeling about this. But one problem I always had with those films was I never could figure out what all the beautiful imagery "meant". What is your "meaning"? Why do we get from one place to another? As an elementary school teacher with several autistic studentsRead more

    There’s an intriguing post-WW2 French feeling about this.
    But one problem I always had with those films was I never could figure out what all the beautiful imagery “meant”. What is your “meaning”? Why do we get from one place to another?
    As an elementary school teacher with several autistic students, I can feel/internalize the issue of metacommunication. I just don’t know what just got “meta communicated”.
    Please keep sculpting! This is intriguing!

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In:

    A brother and a sister takes care of each other in an abusive home an because of this a special bond is created between them, like symbiosis, one thing that can not live without another

    Karel Segers Logliner

    Who is the main character? "Takes care of each other" is not interesting enough to expect people buy a ticket to see it. The abuse won't help either, it will rather turn more people away. "a special bond" sounds like the relationship twins often have, so it is not unique. How can you make it uniqueRead more

    Who is the main character?

    “Takes care of each other” is not interesting enough to expect people buy a ticket to see it. The abuse won’t help either, it will rather turn more people away.

    “a special bond” sounds like the relationship twins often have, so it is not unique. How can you make it unique and interesting for a film?

    The concept needs some work, or else we need more detail…

    Good luck!

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In:

    When a entire citys population disappears over night, it's up to the young soldier to find out where and why in order to find his sister again. / Amanda E

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    I should note that the reason I changed it to 'when he returns from war' is because it explains how he himself wasn't lost with the city. If the city disappeared over night - how is it he didn't go with it?

    I should note that the reason I changed it to ‘when he returns from war’ is because it explains how he himself wasn’t lost with the city. If the city disappeared over night – how is it he didn’t go with it?

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