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A young boy living in Australia try's to earn some Money by selling paper's just so he can support his Family
Hey Mat, I guess there's something missing like that 'pow', kick people in the face with your ideas. Good things to remember, picking it up from Karel's writing class are these, especially for loglines. 1. Character 2. Inciting Incident 3. Goal 4. Obstacles 5. Stages 6. Antagonist God bless and seeRead more
Hey Mat, I guess there’s something missing like that ‘pow’, kick people in the face with your ideas. Good things to remember, picking it up from Karel’s writing class are these, especially for loglines.
1. Character
2. Inciting Incident
3. Goal
4. Obstacles
5. Stages
6. Antagonist
God bless and see you at school tomorrow!
See less21 year old guy attempt's to jump his motorbike over a broken bridge but fail's when realising the gap in the bridge is to Wide
Is this a short film? I feel like you've explained everything - including the crisis moment - in the logline and I can't see the potential for dramatic conflict. Why is your character jumping over the broken bridge? What is at stake?
Is this a short film? I feel like you’ve explained everything – including the crisis moment – in the logline and I can’t see the potential for dramatic conflict.
Why is your character jumping over the broken bridge? What is at stake?
See lessWhen a dubious Art Director discovers that a new government assurance, is a device to control S.I.F.A., he must rescue his girlfriend from a rogue employer.
Well the assurance is a mandatory rule passed by the government to guard against retna deteriation...blindness ....But theres a neat twist......Read the synopsis..Be interested to see what you think mate...........HIGH CONCEPT...Brother........The device well it's being used for a hidden agenda.....Read more
Well the assurance is a mandatory rule passed by the government to guard against retna deteriation…blindness ….But theres a neat twist……Read the synopsis..Be interested to see what you think mate………..HIGH CONCEPT…Brother……..The device well it’s being used for a hidden agenda……….Any more queries.Pretty straight forward stuff.The logline gives you the crux without revealing any insights….There for the script.Happy writing Richiev………….Sure I know the dual protag , antag is daring however because the Government is in cahoots and holds the patent to the L.E.C.S. Pharmacuticals…………Chico works at SIFA Art Director..His girlfriend is the head optometrist…….A
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