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  1. Posted: March 30, 2013In: Student Loglines

    After a troubled teen girl is caught vandalizing state property, she is ordered to spend 6 months in juvenile detention center; where she falls in love with the, married, faculty art teacher.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2013 at 8:51 am

    I infer-- because it's not stated in the logline-- that the falling in love is mutual. If that is the case, then there are all kinds of potential conflicts and complications. And stating in the logline the explicit reason why she ended up in juvenile detention seems extraneous. Isn't all we need toRead more

    I infer– because it’s not stated in the logline– that the falling in love is mutual. If that is the case, then there are all kinds of potential conflicts and complications.

    And stating in the logline the explicit reason why she ended up in juvenile detention seems extraneous. Isn’t all we need to know up front is that she’s a JD serving time?

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  2. Posted: March 22, 2013In: Student Loglines

    When a young man discovers that he is a clone of a dead scientist he wants to find out why the scientist cloned himself, while keeping the fact that he is a clone a secret and getting on with his life.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2013 at 8:17 am

    Would be more interesting if being a clone is more than a curious circumstance; that is, it has consequences complications (health, sanity) that he has to deal with... or else.

    Would be more interesting if being a clone is more than a curious circumstance; that is, it has consequences complications (health, sanity) that he has to deal with… or else.

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  3. Posted: March 21, 2013In: Student Loglines

    A lost student Les Hertsal at a big university campus trying to find his first class turns into nightmare when no one can help find the room the university is turned upside down in a mysterious campus with no teachers or students.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 12:54 pm

    Very confusing logline and have no idea what's at stake, why I should care whether he finds the room he's looking for.

    Very confusing logline and have no idea what’s at stake, why I should care whether he finds the room he’s looking for.

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