1. Posted: March 22, 2013In:

    When a small-town father is framed for murder and sent to jail, a young lawyer strives to prove his innocence.

    The life changing event and jeopardy are clear. Other elements are missing. Is the hero the lawyer? does he have a stake in the outcome? Does he have a personality flaw, and arc? The villain is missing. I guess he framed the victim to cover his own guilt. Any visual clue would help.

    The life changing event and jeopardy are clear. Other elements are missing. Is the hero the lawyer? does he have a stake in the outcome? Does he have a personality flaw, and arc? The villain is missing. I guess he framed the victim to cover his own guilt. Any visual clue would help.

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  2. Posted: March 22, 2013In:

    When a sailor's young son is taken out to sea by ghosts on his father's boat, the father struggles to get his son back after the superstitious townspeople refuse to be involved with a "haunted" boat.

    SydneyPaul

    Looks interesting - here is the same idea tweaked a little, in case it helps: "When ghosts commandeer his boat and take his young son, a sailor has until dawn to overcome superstitious townspeople and assemble a rescue team to save his boy from purgatory." Good luck!

    Looks interesting – here is the same idea tweaked a little, in case it helps:

    “When ghosts commandeer his boat and take his young son, a sailor has until dawn to overcome superstitious townspeople and assemble a rescue team to save his boy from purgatory.”

    Good luck!

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  3. Posted: March 22, 2013In:

    When a girl wakes up with a beard on her first day at a new school she has to think of ways of hiding it from everyone but things get more complicated when she develops a crush.

    I was going to say, yeah, I can't see how this is more than a one- or two-gag film.

    I was going to say, yeah, I can’t see how this is more than a one- or two-gag film.

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