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When he notices that the camera-man on set is an alien planning on taking over the world, the percipient lead actor must convince the rest of the crew to save the planet.
Putting 'When he' at the start is a little confusing. Personally I would put that it is the lead actor first. Otherwise I like the idea. Nice logline.
Putting ‘When he’ at the start is a little confusing. Personally I would put that it is the lead actor first. Otherwise I like the idea. Nice logline.
See lessWhen two friends wake up to a sunless morning, they learn their roommate hasn’t come home from last night. After a failure to contact him or anyone else, they venture outside in an attempt to understand this anomaly.
Such a cool premise, but with so much going on it makes this quite a hefty logline. When two confused friends wake up to a sunless morning, they must venture outside to find their roommate who never came home and figure out this anomaly. This does remove the making contact part, but I think that's nRead more
Such a cool premise, but with so much going on it makes this quite a hefty logline.
When two confused friends wake up to a sunless morning, they must venture outside to find their roommate who never came home and figure out this anomaly.
This does remove the making contact part, but I think that’s not the most crucial information here and is better left out for the sake of brevity
See lessWhen he wakes up in the middle of a street, a boy must figure out why people are ignoring him.
When a young boy wakes up in the middle of a busy street, alone and with no memories, he must figure out why people are ignoring him and why he is so cold.
When a young boy wakes up in the middle of a busy street, alone and with no memories, he must figure out why people are ignoring him and why he is so cold.
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