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When an 18-year-old female accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, she must find a way to come out to her parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.
Perhaps if her parents were conservative or traditional it might up the stakes. Plus it would only add one word to the logline word count. ----- "When she accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, a hesitant student must come out to her traditional parents beforeRead more
Perhaps if her parents were conservative or traditional it might up the stakes. Plus it would only add one word to the logline word count.
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“When she accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, a hesitant student must come out to her traditional parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.”
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Overall your logline is solid and gets the story across to the reader.
A good logline.
When a delusional young woman is confronted by the closure of her uncle’s vintage car dealership, she must travel cross-country to see it one last time.
I think the proper format should be:WHEN (An EVENT happens), a (CHARACTER) MUST (do the ACTION)
I think the proper format should be:WHEN (An EVENT happens), a (CHARACTER) MUST (do the ACTION)
See lessWhen told that the fate of the insane is worse than that of a normal prisoner, a murderer who plans to pretend to be insane must attempt to make the court consider him a sane murderer.
it's a bit wordy - Any way to simplify it?
it’s a bit wordy – Any way to simplify it?
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