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Clint CurePenpusher
Posted: June 23, 20152015-06-23T10:41:49+10:00 2015-06-23T10:41:49+10:00In: Public

1850s. When a shipwreck survivor swaps his convict uniform with a drowned lieutenant, he must keep up the charade or face execution from his rescuers.

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    1. FFF Mentor
      2015-06-23T20:41:50+10:00Added an answer on June 23, 2015 at 8:41 pm

      the expression “keep up the charade” is too vague: it’s what all the film is about!

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2015-06-24T10:37:29+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2015 at 10:37 am

      This has the potential to describe an interesting period piece that can be set in any newly colonized land however the plot is vague and makes the story seam weak.

      Better to define the shipwreck as the inciting incident then a corresponding goal.
      What is it the convict wants? To get a plot of land in the new colony? To kill the officer that lashed him on the ship? To get revenge against the people who sent him away from home?

      For example:

      After a shipwreck a surviving convict takes the clothes and assumes the identity of a drowned lieutenant he works his way up the military ranks in the new colony so he can kill the commandant who condemned him to exile.

      Hope this helps.

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