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Anand Padmanabhan
Posted: September 24, 20132013-09-24T21:13:00+10:00 2013-09-24T21:13:00+10:00In: Public

80 year old Rachel wakes up in the spirit world and finds out she is dead. It was entirely different what she had thought of life after death and to her shock there was only 80 minutes left to rebirth. Rachel needs to complete a task which will decide her karma in her newborn life. The challenge in completing the task – she is getting younger minute by minute in the spirit world and will take rebirth as a newborn in 80 minutes. She needs to use the time appropriately to achieve the task, as in the early minutes and in the end ones, she will either be too old or too young for the task and she has to complete the task while her coffin is buried in the funeral. Will she succeed or not, time will tell.

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    1. LoglinesRUS
      2013-09-24T23:24:22+10:00Added an answer on September 24, 2013 at 11:24 pm

      Hi Anand, this is not a logline. While the concept of your film sounds interesting, a logline should only be 35-40 words and in one sentence. What you have written is more of a synopsis. Consider re-writing in the correct format. Good luck.

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    2. Anand Padmanabhan
      2013-09-25T01:18:39+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2013 at 1:18 am

      Thanx a lot…..tried for a log line, but not able to incorporate the crux of the story.

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    3. LoglinesRUS
      2013-09-25T01:49:49+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2013 at 1:49 am

      That is the point though, you have to be able to condense your story into the fewest number of words to get to the heart of it. You have a lot of extra details that are not required for a logline. If you can’t you may not have a focused enough story. How about this?
      “When an old woman wakes up in the spirit world and realizes she has died and only has 80 minutes until she is reborn to correct her karma, she must complete a series of tasks or risk a new life of struggle and trials.”
      44 words and says the same thing.

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    4. Anand Padmanabhan
      2013-09-25T01:56:02+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2013 at 1:56 am

      Yup you are the master…. got the thing… will make the changee

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