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CLAY53Penpusher
Posted: July 29, 20192019-07-29T06:55:23+10:00 2019-07-29T06:55:23+10:00In: SciFi

A bible schoolteacher is being beat to death by two cops, if he doesn’t fight back, he will be killed.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2019-07-30T04:27:34+10:00Added an answer on July 30, 2019 at 4:27 am

      “When the African preacher they brutalized begins using powers, two racist cops must escape the inhuman being or lose their souls forever.”?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2019-07-29T22:51:10+10:00Added an answer on July 29, 2019 at 10:51 pm

      As yqwerz said.? It describes a scene, but not a plot to flesh out a 90 minute movie.? And? why is the genre SciFi?

      And on the upside, if he dies,? because he’s a believer,? he gets to take the fast lane to heaven, right?? So what’s the problem?? What’s to worry about?? It’s a happy ending for him.. :-]

      So what’s going on?? What’s the story, the plot? What becomes his objective goal after he survives the attack?? Who/what opposes him?? In the long run of the film, what’s at stake?

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    3. yqwertz Mentor
      2019-07-29T16:47:09+10:00Added an answer on July 29, 2019 at 4:47 pm

      This sounds like the description of a single scene, not an entire 90 minute movie.

      Since you posted this under SciFi, you should add some SciFi elements to the logline.

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