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A Black Comedy/Sports Drama is about Jacob McFarland, a Football coach who had the label as “The Dirty Coach”

A Black Comedy/Sports Drama is about Jacob McFarland, a Football coach who had the label as “The Dirty Coach”
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    1. Uberwriter

      Please check out the formula advice on this website. From there, you can organize a basic idea of what your story is about.

      Good luck.

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    2. Singularity

      In a logline you have a lead character
      Something happens to the lead character
      as a result he has a goal

      For instance if, as a result of being dirty he gets kicked out of the NFL, he now has to coach 12 year old’s… his goal would be, if he can win a championship with his rag tag losers he might get hired back in the NFL.
      But he has a rival who purposely takes over the cross town team in order to stop him from winning.

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    3. Singularity

      What Foxtrot25 and Richiev wrote.

      Also,? no need to write in the name of the film or character in the logline, again, check out the ‘Formula’ tab up top.

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