Last Chance(revised 3)
A brutal assassin wins custody of his children, one of them can tell the future and they must use his gift to find a way to end their father's gruesome acts, or their life becomes endangered.
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I like this concept a lot.
I do feel like the focus of the kid with the powers is lost because for some reason my mind keep getting drawn to the assassin.
I like it.
I think it’s “…their lives become…”
Yeah you’re right, the boy with the gift is actually the protagonist along with his sister, i should find a way to bring him the spotlight on him.
Thanks timmyelliot, I’ll change that.
Does this mean this log-line is already perfect.? Someone help me out here.
Not perfect but in my opinion you are not far from there with a few modifications. Are you going to make another submission?
Nope i think i’m okay with this. Thanks