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Posted: November 24, 20172017-11-24T07:11:18+10:00 2017-11-24T07:11:18+10:00In: Drama

A career-focused artist demands a ?share no details? rule with her one-night-stand, but becomes tempted to break her own rule when they start to bond during the disastrous night.

A career-focused artist demands a ?share no details? rule with her one-night-stand, but becomes tempted to break her own rule when they start to bond during the disastrous night.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-11-26T12:41:52+10:00Added an answer on November 26, 2017 at 12:41 pm

      Not sure what the story is from the logline – Das ist nicht gut!

      What does she want as a result of the bond? A relationship? If so what kind (she can’t possibly be in love after one night)? What does she do to get what she wants? These are the most important pieces of information a logline should contain but are missing in this version.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2017-11-26T15:47:55+10:00Added an answer on November 26, 2017 at 3:47 pm

      What are the stakes? Why is it important she they don’t trade personal details? This is the centerpiece of? your plot, why is it such a bad thing that they start to get to know each other?

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