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Alan SmitheePenpusher
A contestant on the Bachelor-esque show "Token of Love" hatches a plot to win the secret million dollar prize with the help of the show's cynical host.
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Is this a fictional TV-show that only exist in your script? In that case I think you don’t need to mention the title of the show in the logline.
Maybe something like this?:
A contestant on a bachelor-esque show conspire with the host to win the secret million dollar prize.
But if the protagonist is somehow cheating ? that’s what it sounds like to me ? what makes us want to root for her?
A lot of potential in this idea. I think it would be more interesting if the host tried to help them win though instead of stealing, which is what it sounds like they are planning.
This idea has a lot of potential for irony, satire, excitement, dark comedy and plenty of belly laughs.
I agree with Adam, I ‘d love to get an extra detail about the contestant, something that puts a little more flesh to her probably well shaped, skinny and tanned bone. Doesn’t necessarily need to be a sympathetic thing, could be something that enhances the comedic tone of the story.
The only thing that puzzles me is why is it the million dollar prize SECRET?
Yeah, why is it a secret?