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A cosmonaut plagued with crippling anxiety who wants to make a difference in the world must attempt to prevent an impending global energy crisis by collecting a newly found energy source on a seemingly desolate planet in deep space.
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“Selected by the UN in an attempt to prevent
the global energy crisis, an astronaut with crippling anxiety is forced to
harvest a newly discovered resource from a seemingly desolate planet.”
Remember to breakdown the concept into its purest form.
ok here’s an updated version
An astronaut plagued with crippling anxiety and a fear of the unknown is selected by the UN to collect a newly discovered energy source on a seemingly desolate planet in deep space in an attempt to prevent a looming global energy crisis on Earth, which could cause civilization as we know it to collapse.
is this one better? worse?
1)
What triggers the hero to act ??
Could the cosmonaut’s fuel be running low ??
2)
What is standing in the way of the hero ??
It sounds like there is more to the desolate planet
and the premise is what is going to happen on this planet. Is this where the story is ??
3)
Why is the cosmonaut wanting to make a difference ??
Do they have family back on Earth ?? What is at stake ??
Hope this helps 😀
Tor