A deceased teacher, wrongly sentenced to Hell for murder, is granted 48 hours on Earth to find the real killer and clear her name
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A deceased teacher, wrongly sentenced to Hell for murder, is granted 48 hours on Earth to find the real killer and clear her name
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I believe this is a pretty solid logline attempt. Possibly mention who she is accused of murdering if it’s important to the story.
“Wrongly sent to Hell for the murder of her husband, deceased teacher is granted 48 house on Earth to find the real killer.”
However, you may not want to start in Hell since there would be no upping the ante.
“In purgatory for the murder of her husband which she did not commit, a deceased teacher is granted 48 hours on earth to discover the true killer or be sentenced to Hell for eternity”