Posted: 2013-03-19T19:53:30+10:00 In:

A disgruntled, older woman sets out to erase all signs of her recently deceased husband, but when his ghost shows up, she discovers a truth that changes everything.

Every Little Breeze

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    1. Logliner

      Its a nice concept, but I sort of miss the moment “and then she must …” that should be at the end of it. What’s at stakes? What it changes? “She discovers a truth that changes everything” can be put into one sentence: “she discovers a shocking truth and now she must – “

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    2. Thanks for your comment. I’m not stuck on this one; in fact, I’ve been trying to capture the gist and soul of the film. This is a new, very simple, one that might work: What do you think?

      Every Little Breeze is a romantic comedy about an older, disillusioned woman who stumbles upon love much against her expectations and desires.

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    3. The hero is the woman, the opponent is the ghost, his appearance is the life-changing event. I would like to know her goal, what she wants to accomplish. I would also like to see the jeopardy she is in, and some irony in her tackling this (undefined) problem.

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    4. Hi Mulford,
      Thanks so much for replying. This is an older one which I’ve abandoned totally. What I’ve got now:

      ‘Til death do us part does not apply in this romantic comedy where a determined older woman struggles to get free from a husband, so controlling, he just won’t quit, even after he’s dead.

      What do you think? Barbara

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    5. “seems to whisper Louise.” Please give us a clue of what she wants, and why he opposes it. My heroine dumps her control freak fianc

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