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mstrain
Posted: November 3, 20122012-11-03T03:11:12+10:00 2012-11-03T03:11:12+10:00In: Public

A drug dependent father finds himself part of an epic battle against a demonic legion and is joined in the fight by a time traveler from the future as he learns the fate of the world lies within the mind of his autistic child.

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    1. 2012-11-07T23:42:03+10:00Added an answer on November 7, 2012 at 11:42 pm

      great point! I tried reading it out loud the way it is and ran out of breath! LOL Thanks!

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    2. GriffUK
      2012-11-04T00:49:25+10:00Added an answer on November 4, 2012 at 12:49 am

      Sounds like an epic battle indeed, but there seem to be too many elements and as such I can’t decide which is the most important. How about missing out the bit about a time traveller, interesting as it is, to focus on the father and son? “A drug dependant father protects his autistic son against a demonic legion as he discovers the fate of the world lies within the boy’s mind”.

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