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barnesworld
Posted: November 30, 20142014-11-30T19:22:05+10:00 2014-11-30T19:22:05+10:00In: Public

A dying playboy has to expose the lying fianc? of a brilliant woman so she can find true love, but falls in love with her himself.

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2014-12-03T17:50:24+10:00Added an answer on December 3, 2014 at 5:50 pm

      What’s at stake for your protagonist? How will exposing the woman’s fiance’s lies help him?

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    2. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2014-12-03T17:50:24+10:00Added an answer on December 3, 2014 at 5:50 pm

      What’s at stake for your protagonist? How will exposing the woman’s fiance’s lies help him?

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2014-12-01T17:32:12+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2014 at 5:32 pm

      Good points raised above by DPG.

      What is his goal? What is the end result? The logline states he ends up falling in love with her himself but then what?

      Hope this helps.

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2014-12-01T17:32:12+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2014 at 5:32 pm

      Good points raised above by DPG.

      What is his goal? What is the end result? The logline states he ends up falling in love with her himself but then what?

      Hope this helps.

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    5. dpg Singularity
      2014-12-01T13:30:36+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2014 at 1:30 pm

      Why would the playboy want to rescue the woman — before he’s fallen in love with her? Why would he get involved in her personal life in the first place? What’s the trigger, the inciting incident?

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    6. dpg Singularity
      2014-12-01T13:30:36+10:00Added an answer on December 1, 2014 at 1:30 pm

      Why would the playboy want to rescue the woman — before he’s fallen in love with her? Why would he get involved in her personal life in the first place? What’s the trigger, the inciting incident?

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    7. 2014-11-30T22:39:48+10:00Added an answer on November 30, 2014 at 10:39 pm

      A dying playboy must expose a deceitful bride but instead becomes entangled in her lust.
      – Maybe?

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    8. 2014-11-30T22:39:48+10:00Added an answer on November 30, 2014 at 10:39 pm

      A dying playboy must expose a deceitful bride but instead becomes entangled in her lust.
      – Maybe?

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