Logliner
Posted: 2015-06-19T11:15:53+10:00 In:

A fake hitman working for the police becomes the real thing when, learning that his actions have inadvertently taken the life of a young child, he teams up with the child's mother to take down a notorious criminal boss who has evaded justice.

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    5 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      If he’s working for the police, why doesn’t he team up with the police rather than a civilian?

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    2. Penpusher

      Too much front-loading. Try this:
      When an undercover cop accidentally kills a child, he teams up with the child’s mother to pursue and execute the criminal boss responsible for the cock-up.

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    3. Penpusher

      Is it because he has killed a child?

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    4. Logliner

      Not going by what’s written in the logline he didn’t…

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    5. Mentor

      This is much better. I still have a problem to imagine how the mother can forget the cop for killing her child.

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