A family heirloom leads a successful businessman through dangerous Brazilian jungle to choose between revenge for his father?s death, and the truth that caused it.
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A family heirloom leads a successful businessman through dangerous Brazilian jungle to choose between revenge for his father?s death, and the truth that caused it.
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>>>leads a successful businessman through dangerous Brazilian jungle
In pursuit of what? ?What specific objective does he pursue that takes him into the jungles of South America?
>>>choose between
How is that a dilemma? Why can’t he have both, truth and revenge?
I agree with dpg, you need a few specifics. Here would be an example of a logline where the character has a specific goal: (your logline would be different of course)
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“When he discovers his family crest is actually a secret map to El Dorado, an adventurous business man travels to the jungles of Brazil determined?to discover?the mythical city, only to find his dead fathers old rivals are hot on the trail as well.”
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Hope that helped