A family of losers, while trying to gain foothold in life, are forced into action to save their kidnapped son

Hi Murugan

Nice idea. Great i.i (Kidnapped son) but who kidnapped him? Who’s the Antagonist?
instead of focusing on a group (family) maybe just one character (father, son, sister, Mother etc)
How would you describe that person, character-wise? Loser, unlucky, lonely, blind? Something that they need to over come before the end of the journey.

Goal –
Stakes –
Inner Conflict –
Outer Conflict –
Hook –
Genre –

Fill out these elements and the logline becomes more clear. try rearranging or placing new words, more powerful, descriptive words. Shorten the logline to under 30 words, 25 seems to be the best.

I suggest looking at the “classics” page, here you can see how a logline is written for movies already made.

“A now broken doctor is sentenced to death for his wifes murder, forced to reassess his morals, he escapes now as the clock ticks he must survive to prove his innocence” – The fugitive

Best of luck

Andrew