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Shannon Giedieviells
Posted: June 5, 20152015-06-05T09:26:39+10:00 2015-06-05T09:26:39+10:00In: Public

A female ex-military operative awakens to discover she has been transformed into a cyborg by a group of scientists who are challenged by her efforts to escape and retaliate.

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    1. Lucius Paisley Logliner
      2015-06-05T09:59:06+10:00Added an answer on June 5, 2015 at 9:59 am

      Does she challenge them after she becomes a cyborg, or is her challenging them the reason why they made her a cyborg? You might need to make this clear since it would be pretty stupid of people to take somebody known to be confrontational and then give them a weapon they can use against you…

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    2. FFF Mentor
      2015-06-05T17:48:38+10:00Added an answer on June 5, 2015 at 5:48 pm

      I assume the cyborg is the main character, so put her clearly at the center of the plot, something like,
      “when an ex-military operative discovers she’s been turned into a deadly cyborg, she must learn how to use her new powers to escape from a maximum security lab”.

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    3. Shannon Giedieviells
      2015-06-06T00:49:04+10:00Added an answer on June 6, 2015 at 12:49 am

      Thank you very much!

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2015-06-06T03:06:24+10:00Added an answer on June 6, 2015 at 3:06 am

      Given that the cyborg character (salvaged human restored and enhanced by technology) has been done several times (as in the Robocop franchise) what does this premise bring that’s new to the trope?

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