A fierce weretiger battles an ancient vampire and the ideologies of her elders as she attempts to protect the woman she loves from an evil that threatens to return and destroy the earth.
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A fierce weretiger battles an ancient vampire and the ideologies of her elders as she attempts to protect the woman she loves from an evil that threatens to return and destroy the earth.
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>>>an evil that threatens to return and destroy the earth
The evil needs to be spelled out because of its magnitude.? We need to know in the logline exactly what it is that threatens to destroy the earth.
Just curious, but what is the threat to the woman your lead loves and needs to protect.
How will it be visualized on screen?
You do need to tie the evil and the vampire attacks together otherwise one is a B story and can be dropped.
I also think you have burried the story.
To protect the woman she loves…..
And take it from there.
When the council of the supra-natural creatures votes for neutrality in the conflict between human and vampires, a were tigress defy their order ?in order to save her human lover and humanity from the returning evil.