Penpusher
Posted: 2016-01-16T14:16:54+10:00 In:

A first date goes from zero to one hundred with an evening in a theme park. Sydney becomes the backdrop as the couple explore the city, doing and talking about everything you shouldn?t on a first date.

A first date goes from zero to one hundred with an evening in a theme park. Sydney becomes the backdrop as the couple explore the city, doing and talking about everything you shouldn?t on a first date.
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    1. Mentor

      Hello,
      for me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie.
      A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where’s “the thing” ?
      I suggest you to try to write the logline for “before sunrise” and “midnight kiss”, try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.

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    2. Singularity

      Is this a logline for a short, a full-length feature film?

      In terms of?a plot, the story line goes from zero to…. zero.? There’s no indication of an inciting incident, no sense of?conflict, no hint of a dramatic question, no stakes.

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