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joey
Posted: April 18, 20122012-04-18T04:01:30+10:00 2012-04-18T04:01:30+10:00In: Public

A fraternity of boys from disadvantaged beginnings rise to some of the highest seats of power under the watchful eye of a man determined to break through the 'establishment'.

FORGE BOYS – When those who fight the establishment, become the establishment.

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    1. Ilandes
      2012-04-19T01:42:24+10:00Added an answer on April 19, 2012 at 1:42 am

      That sounds really intriguing!

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    2. Paul Clarke Samurai
      2012-04-19T11:59:04+10:00Added an answer on April 19, 2012 at 11:59 am

      This does sound like something that could me made. Reminds me of Sleepers.

      But not as specific. Maybe you could include a motivation more specific that just breaking the establishment? Is it revenge?
      Also, is there a villain? Someone actually stopping them, or is it just society in general. Would work better if we could focus on character.

      The irony of the disadvantaged becoming the establishment is interesting. I like it.

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