Logliner
Posted: 2017-09-11T06:24:15+10:00 In:

A knight assembles a clandestine operation in order to rescue the princess of Jerusalem from the infamous king during the crusades.

A knight assembles a clandestine operation in order to rescue the princess of Jerusalem from the infamous king during the crusades.
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    1. Logliner

      I think his logline is about the plan more than the action of rescuing. I think It could be like this: …during the crusades, a knight must rescue a princess to save her kingdom before they kill her.
      Because the plan could be shown in a scene, however it is not about the plan or yes?
      (sorry if my english is bad)

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    2. Singularity

      Is this based (less or more) on an actual historical characters and events?

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    3. Singularity

      Is the story about how the knights assemble? If that’s what the story is about, then your are good.

      If the story is about the actual rescue operation I would drop the part about the assembly and get on with what they must actually do to save the princess.

      “When the princess of Jerusalem is captured, her betrothed and a group of knights must…”

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