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michael2689Penpusher
Posted: June 10, 20222022-06-10T16:28:05+10:00 2022-06-10T16:28:05+10:00In: Comedy

A man wants to date a woman. However, a bad couple takes away their paintings of Santa Claus displayed in a park, causing conflict and misunderstanding between the man and the woman.

Title: Santa Claus Is Miserable.

Genre: Christmas Rom-Com

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2022-06-11T14:34:21+10:00Added an answer on June 11, 2022 at 2:34 pm

      I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the ‘bad couple’ friends and this incident causes trouble between them?

      The wording is just a little unclear but the overall idea does get through.
      So more along the lines of a minor tweak to the logline, not a major overhaul.

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      • michael2689 Penpusher
        2022-06-11T17:51:05+10:00Replied to answer on June 11, 2022 at 5:51 pm

        Yes, it isn’t clear. I have changed it.

        Thanks. I didn’t know there was a reply button so I sent you an email. Sorry about that.

        Michael

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