A man having an affair takes his mistress out to the woods when they witness two thugs dumping a body the lake.
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A man having an affair takes his mistress out to the woods when they witness two thugs dumping a body the lake.
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When a man and his mistress on a week-end tryst witness two thugs dumping a body, they must outrun and outsmart deadly pursuants through a mountainous forest.
“When they witness two thugs dumping a body, a man and his mistress must…” (do this thing)
That would be an event not a logline
For it to be a Logline, it should be something along the lines..
“When an illegitimate couple trying to pull out of the woods witness two thugs dumping a body, they learn the corpse to be his wife [and must reach this specific goal]
now (hopefully) with clear stakes, the plot thickens..