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Posted: July 18, 20152015-07-18T18:42:59+10:00 2015-07-18T18:42:59+10:00In: Public

A naive girl with a useless superhero power struggles to see if true love really exists.

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    1. blossomingscripts Penpusher
      2015-07-18T19:15:55+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2015 at 7:15 pm

      Fairly vague. What’s the useless superpower and how does it relate to her difficulty in finding true love?

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      2015-07-18T19:38:06+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2015 at 7:38 pm

      Hello, a logline should give a clear picture of the structure of the movie (read this little guide https://loglines.org/howto/ or any other guide on the internet) so you have to include an inciting event, opponent, stakes etc… Expressions such as “see if true love really exists” should be banned because they’re too vague, they doesn’t mean anything visually, nor in terms of plot. What is the useless superpower (you should always be specific)?

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    3. 2015-07-18T20:30:20+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2015 at 8:30 pm

      Useless superhero power? Either you don’t know the definition of useless or the concept of a superhero power. The power, whatever it is, can’t be useless if it makes her a superhero. I’m reminded of the interviewing scenes in Mystery Men ( http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0132347/?ref_=nm_flmg_act_87 ) where a lot of people with useless super powers (note the deletion of the term hero) audition for a superhero job. Janeane Garofalo, The Bowler, gets the position as her super power can be used in a superhero capacity. That being said you need to draw a connection between whatever power she has and the inability to find true love. Right now I can halfway see a female version of Shallow Hal (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0256380/?ref_=fn_tt_tt_4). Hal is given the superpower of only being able to see inner beauty in order to find true love.

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