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Posted: 2019-01-22T11:28:43+10:00 In:

When a new long range torpedo is fired and goes missing, a submarine commander must find the torpedo before it finds a target and starts a war.

When a new long range torpedo is fired and goes missing, a submarine commander must find the torpedo before it finds a target and starts a war.
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    1. Mentor

      Yep, as others have mentioned needs more info. Even if it was connected to systems that detect threats, which are being built today, and it determined that its creators were the threat.

      My only other thing, which maybe is explained in story, is: If the missisle picks it?s target and goes for it, would a submarine actually have any chance of stopping it? Wouldn?t it be going too fast under water or be out of the water?

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    2. Singularity

      As Richiev stated, how does a torpedo go rogue? I feel there needs to be an antagonist who has fired this torpedo with the intention of starting WWIII. Whoever this antagonist is needs to have a better reason than just “because he wants to”.

      I think you can lose “A newly turned Commander is given his first mission”. To me, this makes it sound planned. Always good to have a green Commander as the protagonist but I want him to find himself thrust in to this position and has to step up and save the day. As the protagonist he must be proactive. If he’s given the mission he’s simply following orders. There are quite a few military films that focus on somebody disobeying orders as it adds conflict and shows the hero proactively seeking a goal because he knows it’s the right course of action.

      Why is there another submarine pursuing this torpedo? What is this adding to the story?

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    3. Singularity

      We, as readers might need just a little more information on this one.

      How does a torpedo ‘go rogue’ ???

      Does the torpedo have an AI brain that has gone bad? And if the torpedo’s A.I. brain has gone bad, does the Torpedo have its own personality, can it be reasoned with?
      Is it like the ‘bomb’ at the end of the movie “Dark Star”, that the lead character must negotiate with when it wants to fulfill?its purpose and explode?

      Just curious because the story of a torpedo ‘gone rogue’ sounds interesting but it definitely?might need a few words of explanation.

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