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MikkelAngelo
Posted: September 16, 20122012-09-16T05:31:54+10:00 2012-09-16T05:31:54+10:00In: Public

A person learns that he is all life on earth and everything that ever was. He gets explained that in this universe he is everyone. "Real people" with their own universe, can't meet him because they are in a different universe.

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    1. Filmstar Penpusher
      2012-09-16T07:58:50+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 7:58 am

      WOW, works great as a short story. What happens then? Or is that the end?

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    2. KevinfromSnap
      2012-09-16T13:08:13+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 1:08 pm

      The concept if very interesting. I feel like you should work out a character and an inciting incident. Maybe his universe is populated by fake people and the stale interactions between him and his projections make him board until he meets someone different. It is revealed that she is actually from a different universe

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    3. 2012-09-16T13:53:11+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 1:53 pm

      This actually IS a short story that has been making the rounds on the internet for years. If you are nit the author of said story, you may have copyright issues.

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    4. MikkelAngelo
      2012-09-16T17:37:00+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 5:37 pm

      Thanks.
      I haven’t worked out a story or character. I just thought that the idea was worth writing down.
      I find it hard to come up with a story, where the main character learns about the horrible truth.

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