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ifrost
Posted: May 19, 20132013-05-19T19:57:50+10:00 2013-05-19T19:57:50+10:00In: Public

A prominent businessman must play with an insane kidnapper a 20 questions game to find and save his wife.

20 bloody questions

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2013-05-19T22:15:38+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 10:15 pm

      All I need to know in 19 words.

      My only quibble is word order. Suggest: “A prominent businessman must play a 20 questions game with an insane kidnapper to find and save his wife.”

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    2. Tony Edward Samurai
      2013-05-19T22:41:54+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 10:41 pm

      .and one other word order quibble me — ‘A prominent businessman must play a game of 20 questions with an insane kidnapper to find and save his wife’…

      Regardless, nice work ifrost!

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2013-05-20T02:24:06+10:00Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 2:24 am

      BTW: in the biz, that’s what’s known as high concept. It’s short and it’s got a hook.

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2013-05-20T06:21:59+10:00Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 6:21 am

      I agree with dpg, great hook!

      “After his wife is kidnapped, a grieving businessman has two hours to play 20 questions in order to save her.”

      “After his wife is kidnapped, a grieving businessman is forced by a psychopath to play 20 twenty questions for a chance to save her.”

      Hope those helped, good luck with this!

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