A rebellious teenage girl and her brother discover a time-traveling chaise lounge in their Grandmother's attic- trapped in the past and facing King Tut's wrath, they find help from an unlikely source- their teenage Grandmother in 1956.

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Posted: January 21, 20132013-01-21T01:53:40+10:00 2013-01-21T01:53:40+10:00In: Public

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throwitfar · Answer 1 · 2013-01-21T02:49:50+10:00

I have modified the last section to bring the irony full circle: “their rebellious teenage Grandmother in 1956.”

Patrick · Answer 2 · 2013-01-21T08:01:15+10:00

The idea is good. The logline itself is on log run-on sentence, and should be double checked for grammar prior to any official substitution.