A cowardly farmer is forced into action when a dragon destroys his town and kidnaps his wife.
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There is an opportunity for a ?but?.
At the end think of adding a complication from your story.
… but soon discovers he needs the help of others to succeed.
Probably not your story. But you get the point.
I suggest you change cowardly to something more complimentary. Ordinary works.
I had an idea of using an amulet to be able to defeat the dragon after it killed his father.
So something along the lines of….
After his father is killed by a menacing dragon , a cowardly farmer must use a sacred amulet to kill the beast after it destroyed his village and kidnapped his wife.
This is short enough you could probably add a detail or two. by detail I mean, does he have to find some magical armor? or a dragon killing bow? or scale an unscaleable mountain or train with a reclusive warrior?
Also, you should begin your logline with the incident that sets the story in motion.
But other than that I get the gist of the story from your short but to the point logline.