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SReyesPenpusher
Posted: May 31, 20132013-05-31T14:18:03+10:00 2013-05-31T14:18:03+10:00In: Public

(Animated Short) Two competitive drunks awake locked inside the Tower of London, only to get caught in an increasingly loud battle of imaginations about how to steal the crown jewels.

A Scotsman and an Irishman…

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    1. 2013-05-31T16:02:47+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2013 at 4:02 pm

      The problem with this is that I’m only seeing a bar room debate… Worthy of a feature? By ‘imagine’ do you mean ‘pull-off (as, get away with 😉 )’ ?

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    2. 2013-05-31T16:08:34+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2013 at 4:08 pm

      Sorry SReyes — whilst commenting it seems your longline changed… Still, it sounds like a Short?…

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    3. SReyes Penpusher
      2013-05-31T16:09:13+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2013 at 4:09 pm

      Entirely agree – just got exactly same feedback in the material world – it’s just a barroom argument, no stakes, so why should you care?

      Thus why changed it to the above to try and increase the stakes. Also edited to include the fact that this is meant to be a short animated feature – my apologies for not being clear.

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