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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: October 20, 20202020-10-20T02:42:47+10:00 2020-10-20T02:42:47+10:00In: Family

A sea otter living on Vancouver Island’s coast fears the ocean, but he hopes to overcome his fears from the help of friendly land creatures.

A sea otter living on Vancouver Island’s coast fears the ocean, but he hopes to overcome his fears from the help of friendly land creatures.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-10-20T07:09:59+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 7:09 am

      Rather than “hopes” — the seat otter MUST overcome his fears. Or else .

      Or else what? What are the stakes. What does he stand to gain by overcoming his fear? What will he (and others) lose if he fails?

      What is his m.o. (action line) for overcoming his fear?

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      • Odie Samurai
        2020-10-25T02:11:36+10:00Replied to answer on October 25, 2020 at 2:11 am

        Sea otters are an endangered species right? So what if he at X and needs to get to Y (conservation area) with the help of his friends? Thus he must overcome his fear of the ocean to survive.

        Baddies: Otter parent killed by poachers, oil slick contamination, climate, etc.

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