The sentinel
allal El AlaouiLogliner
A sentinel fights alone in Sahara when a ghost appears to him suddenly just to advice him to leave his place in order to find love and suceed in it after having failed his first one.
Share
Have an account? Sign In Now
I’m sorry but your story is completely incoherent to me.
Your protagonist is a sentinel – what is this? I mean, I know what the word means, what is the character? What was he guarding? Is he human?
The ghost’s advice is your inciting incident. But I don’t understand why he sees a ghost (maybe I don’t need to for the logline to work), nor do I understand what he then does – again, because I don’t know who this character is.
Why does he have to find love? What is the process of finding love? Does he pack up his gear, move to New York and start perusing the classified?
What are the stakes of failure? He’s already failed love once (if I’m reading that right) … if he fails to find love, does he just continue not having love?
the sentinel is a soldier fighting somewhere in sahara.In his village , a powerful man took his girl friend and get married with her and then our soldier swears and he will never go back to his village that’s why he goes to army to fight .Suddenly, a ghost appears to him ( his father ) and he says to him that it is no need to die without purpose and that love could be found in life .Our soldier having recognized his father , he leaves his place to go a tribute in sahara in order to find a woman to love and cherich but during his voyage there was another soldier( antigonist) who wants the same thing but through possession her unlike our soldier.
“Visited by a ghostly stranger, a lone guard risks life and limb against a controlling rival to find true love.”