Penpusher
Posted: 2016-05-17T11:21:34+10:00 In:

A war has broken out because an English citizen was out trying to survive in the Amazon and started burning the Amazon rainforest down. An American military aircraft pilot was flying over the Amazon rainforest and spotted him and didn?t like that he started a fire in the Amazon rainforest. Now the English want our territory.

A war has broken out because an English citizen was out trying to survive in the Amazon and started burning the Amazon rainforest down. An American military aircraft pilot was flying over the Amazon rainforest and spotted him and didn?t like that he started a fire in the Amazon rainforest. Now the English want our territory.
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    1. Singularity

      Agreed with the above notes.

      Economy is vital in a logline.

      Think of it as a means to describe;?what happened to whom that motivated?them take action to achieve a specific goal.

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    2. Singularity

      I agree, who is the lead character

      Second, why would an American military plane be flying over the Amazon? That is another countries sovereign territory.

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    3. Logliner

      Hey Luke, did you download the checklist?
      Also, check out the tips on how to write a logline.

      First question you may expect: who’s the main character?

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